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Dark Poetry #3

My Dying World

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

0 posted 2002-07-02 09:56 PM

In my world
Everyone is dying,
In my world…
Disease is sweet.

In my world
Everyone is useless,
In my world…
Hopelessness is beautiful.

In my world
Everything is gone,
In my world…
Vacant is a God.
In the world I’ve created…
Everyone is dead.
But in this world,
Life, is no better than death.

Best wishes,
Sara

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

1 posted 2002-07-02 10:11 PM

wow, that made me cry , i liked it

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

PoeticGoddessOfDepression
Member

since 2002-07-02

Posts 439
I am everywhere

2 posted 2002-07-02 10:14 PM

I'm sorry! I didn't mean to make you cry.

Thank you for replying to my poem. That means alot.

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

3 posted 2002-07-02 10:35 PM

Sorry, goddess, there's nothing about this that I didn't like...therefor, no comment

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

devinechild22
Senior Member

since 2002-08-28

Posts 571

4 posted 2004-01-01 03:53 PM

Sara you sure do have a way with words. You're so talented and I admire you greatly.
*Allison*

"Come away with me, Wendy. Come away to Neverland."

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