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Dark Poetry #3

life?

Match
Member

since 2002-07-01

Posts 286
Canada Edmonton

0 posted 2002-07-01 08:50 PM

Life
The wind blowing back your tear stained face.
A childs broken heart and broken bones.
Silent cries of the unknown victims.
Mothers tears,
morning her loss.
A drunk driver,
A homless man on the bench ,
No shelter,
Only rubble.
No place to go ,
Nothing to say,
Isn't it obvious?
Look around and you tell me what do you see?

Do I dare to look at whats really there,
Will I be burned?
I cant see past all the pain and torture that goes on in the places we call,
home.
~Azi

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

1 posted 2002-07-01 09:01 PM

well written piece, match.

There is a lot of useless suffering in this world, hope that you skirt most of it on your journey.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do...provided it's done in private and you wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2002-07-01 10:33 PM

To see through the eyes of another is always a painful journey in helplessness...

you've gotten the point across...and damn good too!!

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

3 posted 2002-07-02 09:25 AM

liked it
arthur

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