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devina
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0 posted 2002-06-30 06:43 PM


Living Hell…

I seethe in my wanting
I cast iron spells
My own dark journals
Are your living hell…

Oh “dear diary”
I’m parched, yet cannot drink
Unashamedly I crave you
As I pen with blood ink…

I crystallize fear
in mock of your admirers
I am your dark shadow
As I feed my own fire…

I covet still
what I cannot feel
For you are taken
You
are not real…

In fantasy you need me
you are wounded fist
Yet still I stand, love-hate you
For non existent kiss

Voodoo is your cursed-
living misery
For you shall strive to love me
As is your destiny…

(evil cackle here)

I seethe in my wanting
I cast iron spells
My own dark journals
Are
Your
Living Hell


Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...


[This message has been edited by devina (06-30-2002 06:44 PM).]

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bsquirrel
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1 posted 2002-06-30 08:54 PM


Hoo ha ha ha ha ha ha! Excellent my minion.... or am ah yrs?



Write on!

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

devina
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2 posted 2002-06-30 09:48 PM


I think we both know the answer to that one...

seeing as how I was here first and all...*EG

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



wranx
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since 2002-06-07
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3 posted 2002-06-30 11:29 PM


Devina,
Liked this very much.

Will have to sleep with my Gris Gris bag.

~wranx

"Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein.

Krishankins
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4 posted 2002-07-01 01:13 AM


You're going to make me have bad dreams!
I like this one a LOT!!


Hugs 2U!

Kris

A bird never flies so high that it can't hit the ground

BrandeeM
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since 2002-05-01
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5 posted 2002-07-03 06:21 PM


Challenge well met I'd say...

can you say stalker t???

lol j/k of course

enjoyed you as always *devious*

devina
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6 posted 2002-07-03 07:34 PM


wranx- is that a good thing...????

Kris- just keepin you on your toes...

BrandeeM- ah yes, well Mike can be very persuasive when he feels like it...I blame the WHOLE stalker incident on him...

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



serenity blaze
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7 posted 2002-07-03 07:38 PM


very very nice, me sis...

I adore the view from the left hand path, and you depicted the dark concentration most vividly.

Now you've done it...I'm going to light some candles...bwahahahaha

hmmm...okay, and some sage and sandalwood, for "protection"

Tiersdin
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8 posted 2002-07-03 07:46 PM


Bravo, Devina!

excellent!

~Tier

"I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..."

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