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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
As I now see reality in such a different light Like sparkles on the ocean's breeze... Infinity of sight: Time has come full circle now, microcosms, I can't say how In words that you will understand...Thoughts are Merely slight of hand. Abandon all your inbred views and see the world as I. Acoustics through this psycho world, revealing things You not yet feel Yet, given time, incorporate: program the mind Indeed you will. Tune in to my waves, comprehend, And like or not you shall Find the one you've always known in eternal search, The astral... Friend who shall be there, compassioned, unabashed You immerse me ~ awed by all Hope springs eternal, I finally desire the lashes In giving my mind, body and soul. Accept my friend these humble gifts, you see the world as I. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I like how the last word of some lines double as end and beginning. Very cool. And "Abandon all your inbred views" has to be the best snarky line I've ever read.  "Es ist Folter, aber ich bin fast dort." Robert Smith's Torture in Deutsch. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
"Yet, given time, incorporate: program the mind Indeed you will." This has got to be the truth!!! enjoyed this!! Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Good job. Liking it here. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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