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Dark Poetry #3

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Scarlet Lady
Member

since 2000-02-11

Posts 242
Midwest

0 posted 2001-01-31 11:20 PM

Far away, there is a place
That place of longing
That looses it's glow
When left to die
And left to cry
There is a place

*DISTANT*

And alone

When no one is home
To call your own
A place that is not quenched
Or relieved without a fire
A temptious rage within
To melt the ice formed
That surrounds the heart
Closer to fevered brow
That died from diseased love

[This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-31-2001).]

Dark_kisses_Within
Senior Member

since 2000-03-21

Posts 680
Kansas

1 posted 2001-02-01 12:17 PM

Very sad read here. Loneliness can be quite the *killer* to some. And yeah I understand the ice around the heart. Its formed by many diffirent things in life.

Nice read,
DkW

firejerm
Member

since 2000-06-13

Posts 217
Springfield, OH, good ol USA

2 posted 2001-02-01 10:10 PM

Something I've learned though is that all things change constantly. Some get better, and others get worse. However, I'm flabbergasted by your write here, I know there is a smile under there somewhere

Jeremy

"Those little slices of death, how I loathe them."
-Edgar Allen Poe

fractal007
Senior Member

since 2000-06-01

Posts 1958

3 posted 2001-02-02 05:07 AM

This was cool! The imagery is great. I think we've all been to this place.

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