Dark Poetry #3 |
goodbyes |
nnie Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14 |
the verdict was guilty when those fateful words were sung the trial was through and finished the man was taken out to be hung he hugged and kissed his children and told his wife goodbye he planned to be with them longer but everything went awry he thought about his family and everything they'd been to him if only he could tell them but his futures looking grim feeling deaths embrace and a tear rolled down his face he looked to the sky and knew this was goodbye they took the noose and fastened it tight now his wife and children are all alone tonight |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Nooses tend to end things Supposedly But the ambient love you portray defies the breath twine takes away. Again, nice poem. |
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nnie Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14 |
thanks, likewise |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
You're fun. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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