Dark Poetry #3 |
A Mother's Spirit Never Dies |
LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
What would I do, If I didn't have you by my side, To keep me from making wrong mistakes, To keep me in line, What would I do, If you were taken away from me? Would I start making the wrong decisions, Would I still be the me you created me to be? What would I do, Without your love and your care, To keep me in a steady pace, To love, help others, and share, What would I do, Without your warm kisses and bear hugs, And those late night snacks, Your undying affection and your love, What would I do, Without our 3 hour long talks, Our drives just to see the trees, Our late night walks, There isn't anything I couldn't do, If I lost you, Because I am a person you made, But I know I would never be the same, You formed me into the person I am, You always let me know that I can, Be anyone or anything I long for, I can do and be even more, Because I'm a little you, And anything you can do, I want to do it too, I want to be a little you... |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I wish I ever could have felt so close to my own mother... Maybe it's one of those "teen" things that's created the distance, but there was no closeness as a child and none now as a young adult. You're very lucky! "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Ya, my mother is the most important person in this whole entire earth to me and if she needed a kidney, a heart, a liver, or anything and I was capable to give it to her I would in a split second. She is gone alot and she is busy all the time but she somehow always finds time somewhere in her busy schedule to hang out with my sister and I, and I love her dearly for it. Maybe she's Supermom? Ya never know! Thanks for the reply. LP1 |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That's awesome writin, LP1. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Thanks Bsquirrel, writing is one of the only things I have in my life that I enjoy and that helps me escape from the world and the environment I'm around alot so I really love, and have a passion to write, and its something I didn't discover I was able to do until I was really depressed one day and I wrote a poem and ever since I have been writing like mad! I love it and I love all you people here. Thanks!!!! LP1 |
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deep_thought Junior Member
since 2002-06-28
Posts 24 |
Very nice, LP1. I liked it a lot. Know what? I'm gonna call up my Mum right away. "It is family you never asked for that is with you forever" |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Lady, A very sweet tribute, done well. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Deep Thought- Thanks for your reply, ya you should call your mom she would appreciate that! Don't forget to tell her you love er'! Wranx- Thanks for the reply, So heartwarming! LP1 |
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