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Moving On |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas 
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Our tears fall down, exploding On cheeks that burn with rage When will we learn to master The turning of life's page I was just wondering one night why it' so hard for people to get past the heartache in their lives. I guess it's because sometimes they really just don't know how to "turn the page". Krishankins your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
It could also be because, they don't want to. Don't make your writings longer than they need to be. Your sparse styling works well for you. But what do I know?, I flunked English. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
Yeah, I flunked it too... I do thank you for the tip though your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Touche'! Very eloquently to the point. That page turning can be too arduous, I know, as for myself, I have found that the simple lifting of a tab elicits a swan dive that seems to be an easy cop-out of having to turn the page, but "inebriate of air" ta boot...lol Great write! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Nice thoughts, nice write. Thanks! These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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