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The emptiness of being me (Bad Goth poem challenge)
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The emptiness of being me (Bad Goth poem challenge) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855
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I find this life to be dreary. It's embrace has the effect of breaking my ribs. No one hears them break in my isolation. The small soft plink of snapping bones. There's not enough bone nestling my heart to keep her out of it. Lenore! Come back to me! It's not your fault that I am unworthy. The day is dreary doom without your radiance. For all eternity, your countenance burns. My radiant angel! Come back to me, please. Come back to me please. Come back to me please. Come back to me. Please? My pain knows no limits. I scoff at thee, sun! Take your hated face from the crypt of my heart! My soul is bleeding white, empty essence. Take that away too! Dreary fool! I pray to my Lovecraftian allies! Take me away from this dreary existence! Send me the calling of your calming storm! Send me away to the sweetness of death! My drear. My dreary day. My dreary day. I know no comfort in today. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
 My work here is done. Though I said nothing about Poe! Or Dirge.  And maybe y' were a bit TOO obvious about the Lovecraft referencing. Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
 Ooo, I am so dark and evil and stuff!Grrr! Do not make me smile! It is illegal in my timezone! Watch my dance of solitude! Hey, no one's watching?! Oh .... right. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
I pray to my Lovecraftian allies! This line rocks.  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Severn. You liked that, huh? Um .... Thanks for readin'!(another here, 'cause there can never be enough)These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
There's another Bad Goth Poem, la-la la-la la-la la! (There is a sorta childish tune to that, you just can't read it. )I is happy! Oh, wait, no... I is ....  dreary. Mopey. Grr.Feel my menacy goth-ness! Uh, yeh. I think I just lost that self-argument."I'd rather be anything but ordinary, please." -Avril Lavigne [This message has been edited by Anvrill (06-24-2002 01:23 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
O wow...giggling, I didn't read this'n before I wrote! I note a theme here with the sun and crypt thing!  sorry!But these are fun...I do hope this challenge catches on...to quote the above rodent? "Please?"  |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Y'know what? I still can't believe you didn't keep the first one! Even *Tyler* wrote and kept his. Hmm... If only he still had a computer, I'd asked him to join PiP just to post his Bad Goth Poem... "Sooner or later, they'll never grow up." -Jim Steinman (unreleased and almost completely unheard, but hey) |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
I'm sure everyone I sent it to deleted it too, Lori. It's gone!These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
"Take your hated face from the crypt of my heart" Themsum perty strong words yer pens a slingin' Mike. Shot me right in the mind. your 100grit love is smoothing my soul |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Glad you liked my silly verse.These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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