Dark Poetry #3 |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
I wrote it through the eyes of a male, actually. Kieran Davies. Part of a more-than-long story I wrote. (like, several novels long) He was, of course, a handy outlet for feelings I didn't want to own up to, so I gave him an almost-girlfriend who had ODed and died. Oh, the things we do to run from our own emotions.
Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Daaaaamn. This poem stands along outside the story's context. You are a wonder, Lorigrrl. She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Excellent! Wish I could read the story! ~Tier |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
evocative arthur |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Ditto on the kudos. Quite tender and loving, In that "too late" kinda way. ~wranx |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Actually, funny thing about this is... (As Mike must have forgotten) the poem written by Kieran Davies don't really hafta do with the story. I just put poems between chapters in this story to seperate things out, fill space, have an excuse for poetry, etc. Kieran is by FAR my favorite character to write poetry through. Not just because he's dark and broody and one of those feel-my-angst teens, but because he's got this soft soft soft sadness around him.... But yeh. I actually have the novels (yes, novels) on th' net... But they're so immature (because the characters range from 13 to .. well, thousands of years old, but still), and very very very angsty. I actually STARTED writing them when I was 13, but the've been kept up to a moderately sane version of my current writing. It's just that you can't completely fix without completely rewriting... And I CAN'T rewrite, what is it, six novels? Augh, I've been doing this writing thing far too long... Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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