Dark Poetry #3 |
Zero |
bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Old old old old OLD poem. Zero I can be alone if I remind myself that a kiss looks like a zero, And can convince my lie I'm not missing anything (nothing). The digital clock blows me kisses all the time, Red and waiting for me to die. She said burn ... together. |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
As they say... An Oldie but goodie! ~Tier "I shall never bond again, as I have bonded with you..." |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, yes, and I can hear "blues" being sung in the background...and I haven't done acid since.. This is quite spare, and does all that it should. More would have been, just more. ~wranx P.S. I agree. There is certainly an amazing amount of talented people in Open, Some are actually astounding. But a post over there goes 5 pages deep within a couple of hours. Like I said before...I've looked at the archives. Goodgoogamooga!! "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Wranx, Glad y' enjoyed that old angst o' mine. And yes, poems do get buried ... which is why Dark is the perfect place to erect the corpses! [This message has been edited by bsquirrel (06-22-2002 01:36 AM).] |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
How old is old, anyway? I mean, you chopped/diced/threw out most of yr old stuff, or at least the ones *I* considered good enough to keep.
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Believe me, some things are better left forgotten. She said burn ... together. |
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Anvrill Senior Member
since 2002-06-21
Posts 710in the interzone now |
Baby! Be good to yourself! Feel my angsty reachiness! |
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