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the Storm |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA 
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I can feel the rain in the air I can smell it The weather is still fair The clouds start to thicken I hear the thunder in the distance The clouds turn black as night I see the light Of the lightning coming down it strikes the tree trunk of brown A fire starts But the rain starts pouring from the sky And puts out the fire It does not deny The clouds start to swirl A tornado touches down I go under ground Hopefully my house will still be around After a hour The wind dies down The rain stops The thunder doesn't pop The storm is gone And I am still around Cold hands means a warm heart |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
That was cool.  She said burn ... together. |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
So, did this just flow from your pen like honey from a spoon? nice write nice read ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
That was great! I loved it, storms usually scare me, but this storm made me smile! LP1 |
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Helium Balloon New Member
since 2002-06-18
Posts 8MB Cannada |
this was good imagery, i like. |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
pardon me.. just finding treasures I will not bend to the cowardice of a silent judgement. |
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