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armanca Member
since 1999-07-07
Posts 211Tennessee |
Untitled A secret untold where death is life and life will never end. In this netherworld deep breaths don't calm instead the feeling of falling is behind every door you greet Every face you know is a stranger behind pale eyes Zombies walk the street as if even the dead wants out Every error, mistake, and maddening experience thrives within the mirror of the sky there is no escape here it is the prison that is made when a secret goes untold. ~Carman |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Good work! It speaks quality and depth. It took one poem to tell me all this. More please. *S*   mYsTiC |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
this is a wonderful piece, thank you for sharing it with the members of passions |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Classic subject, well wrought with embedded fear. Nice work. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
I agree. This is very good. |
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