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Dark Poetry #3

How could I

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-14 11:16 AM

I dont know why I feel nothing
Its strange because I just dont seem to care
All the love that used to shine so brightly
Fades like it was never even there
Two days since we became nothing
And now I fight just to hold on
To the things we used to toss around so lightly
Start to call but realize that your gone
I failed you when I walked out of your life
I made you think I'm something that I'm not
I promised you I wouldn't leave you lonely
And your cry now because it seems that I forgot

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

1 posted 2002-06-14 12:19 PM

clever ending
arthur

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-06-15 03:21 PM

who are you talkin about?
-neala

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

3 posted 2002-06-16 09:55 PM

you rachel

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

4 posted 2002-06-17 10:14 AM

Ohhh..I liked the poem thought.

Helium Balloon
New Member

since 2002-06-18

Posts 8
MB Cannada

5 posted 2002-06-18 10:20 PM

i really liked this poem, it brings out the little things i think that hurt.

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-06-23 03:07 PM

Yep. Welcome to a forced adulthood.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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