Dark Poetry #3 |
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Why are there voices in my head |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
Pondering suicide I realized I was dead All the friends I thought I had Were just voices in my head Don’t listen to their lies I thought Don’t loose your sense of self They’re the ones, killing you Draining your mental health Been drowning for some time now But I just can’t help but wonder How long till I stop fighting it Give up and just go under I’m sure I'll be fine when I wake up Wonder when that will be And will the things I’ve done, while asleep Will kill what’s left of me (any reference to killing or suicide is metaphorical) |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Great write, but sure glad that you've woken up to write it. I also liked the tempo your words created, very splendid. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
loved it very cleverly done arthur |
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nnie Junior Member
since 2002-05-17
Posts 14 |
hey chrisamadidlybob that was a really good poem. if i got a tattoo... thats what i would want it to say, yep..... . . . . .. . .no but that was a really good poem,shhhhhhh. you heard me. welll i love. so, yah. |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
That was a great poem, good write! Keep up the good work. LP1 |
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