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Dark Poetry #3

Forgive and forget

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-11 06:45 PM

I know that this really isn't fare
But I must admit
That I dont care
Never learned what I had to do
The things it took to handle you
Left you with a broken heart
And feeling kinda ripped apart
I swear to you I did my best
But I'm tierd and need to rest
Dont be weary
Your not alone
Your have your friends
If you can reach the phone
So I'll go my way, you go yours
You will learn
To close your soars
And you will be happy in the end
When your broken heart
Finally mends

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

1 posted 2002-06-11 10:16 PM

No..that is all I can say!
-Neala

wranx
Member Elite

since 2002-06-07

Posts 3689
Moved from a shack to a barn

2 posted 2002-06-11 10:51 PM

kinson, dude,
Your offering is well thought out and presented nicely, but you got this spelling thing goin' on.

I liked it though...
No kidding.

~wranx

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

3 posted 2002-06-23 03:30 PM

The thing that got me was "kinda ripped apart." Ouch.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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