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Dark Poetry #3

You dont care

kinson
Member

since 2002-05-13

Posts 66
somewhere between here and there

0 posted 2002-06-11 09:01 AM

What happened
Where did you go
Did you leave me
I don’t know
Am I bitter
Yes and no
But I feel I’m reaching a new low
When I have time to think things are different
When you’re not around things seem to change
A wave in the hall is reassuring
But your love seems so long ago
It’s late and I think I’m leaving
Rest up for a new day
All ways in my dreams we were together
But even there you’ve gone away

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

1 posted 2002-06-11 10:20 AM

It really hurts when the person you love doesn't love you back. Its hard whenever you've made a committment to someone and they just blow it off and simply don't care. Good expression of feelings here! Write on.
LP1

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

2 posted 2002-06-11 01:40 PM

I am sorry they don't love you...although good poem.
-Neala

renathon
Junior Member

since 2002-06-09

Posts 23

3 posted 2002-06-11 01:58 PM

This poem reminds me of one I wrote where I would see the back of someone I had a crush on, but it really wasn't him, and it wouldn't have mattered since he wouldn't have thought twice about me. I like your poem, where's the question marks though?

http://members.cox.net/lordrenathon

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

4 posted 2002-06-24 01:13 AM

The best part is when y' get over it and find a new love. It takes time, though. Good poem.

These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun.
-RHCP

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