Dark Poetry #3 |
I Hate Lying |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Lying is bad Makes happy couples break up Makes the boy or the girl feel like they deserved to be lied to Lying makes all people sad From adults down to children Lying is so stupid Yet why do we do it when we hurt our loved ones when we do? Because we don't want to upset our loved ones But that doesn't make lying right I hate lying and that is that |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
i'd be lying if i disagreed with you. the wrong things seem to make the most sense... "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
lieing is bad, unlike this poem, which is good, its a good poem about a bad thing, complements. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
So what's this poem doing lying at the bottom? These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
And takes on the shape of a chalice of truth at that! A pure piece, loner, and yet I share in the sadness of difficulty others unlike yourself have with truth. Reminds me of a line in Murder of Crows..."Never waste the opportunity to tell someone you love them; never accept the blame for something you did not do, and always tell the truth...it's easier to remember later." |
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