Dark Poetry #3 |
Burn |
the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Burn Burn Burn Down to the ground I don`t care if the school burns I just want it to burn burn down to the ground Burn Burn Burn Everything Burn The books, the papers, the tables, The lockers Just burn down to the ground I don`t care about the school I just want it to be made into ash I just want it to burn burn burn Down to the ground So I don`t have to deal with it anymore Nothing but bad memories Nothing but memories of getting picked on. Just let it burn. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
i just plain like this. "Just let it burn." "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Reminds me a bit of the late 1960's there were parts of the city that burnt down. Sparks of rage started the fires houses and lives burnt to the ground. it solved nothing it helped nothing, just left ash and forgotten dreams. Gloom |
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kinson Member
since 2002-05-13
Posts 66somewhere between here and there |
so, you got picked on, and you wanna turn that pain around, and take it out on an establishment, or what it represensts, ok, good write though |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
The 60's catch-phrase was "Burn, baby burn". Looks like things haven't changed so much after all. ~wranx "Writing is a perfectly natural thing to do....just remember to wash your hands afterward"....Heinlein. |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Reminds me of a very controversial Calvin & Hobbes where Calvin dreams of bombing the school from a fighter plane. For pure angst, it's not a bad (if not constructive) flight of fantasy. I miss Calvin and Hobbes. :p These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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