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Bleeding Sky
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Bleeding Sky |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Sky bleeds red And night breaths fire A howl in the distance Cries in the dark Memories haunt Slow to fade Embraced by fate And forsaken by the same Count the breaths And rhythmic beats Feel the night Alone and cold |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Excellent! I like your style, short poem yet gets the gist of your point across loud and clear. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
nice sense of pending nasty not quite sure is about to happen but it will not be nice arthur |
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