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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
In that last leap from the living to the dead I shall not go in peace But filled with fearful dread let only darkness greet me No lamp or light my guide let me not hear or see thee Grant that my soul and I,both died And God smiled his terrible smile And reached out his mighty hand He made me see both what i am And what i might have been arthur |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
And reached out his mighty hand He made me see both what i am And what i might have been ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Arthur, a very interesting write you have posted here. These last three lines sum it all up, and give it a good bold closing. Enjoyed! ~hugs across the pond~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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EarthenSoul Member
since 2002-05-30
Posts 163WA, USA |
Indeed, a powerful closing. This is an enjoyable read. Provokes personal thoughts and fears of mortality. |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
a very powerful poem and succinct . really good , i liked it |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
I liked it....it spoke to me...I always wanted to say that anyways good. -Neala |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like the way that you say what needs to be said, without using up all the worlds words. wranx |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Nicely profound Arthur... I like it  K |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Always a fine read, arthur. I'm glad yr here. These smiling eyes are just a mirror for the sun. |
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