Dark Poetry #3 |
Intriguing Violation |
firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Crucified for letting it go You came to me from no where Slicing my imagination Yet showing me that you care, Twilight turned to midnight My eyes wide with wonder Thoughts of you throughout me And my fantasies begin to wander. Visions of you in evil fashion Grip my soul now you possess Yet caressing my heart strings With such sweetness and finess, Cold rain stings me outside When I stepped out to black But when this night finally ends I pray to passion you come back. Rejuvination is no hyperbole For your belief in me is real The iron odor of lost blood dwindles As these old wounds begin to heal, Take my hand please don't let go I need to feel your fragrant flesh The heavy load gone from me As each breath is now fresh. The maddening screams I once heard Drift out into the forever unknown Bewildered in such a short time By a feeling that's forever grown, You made me find something lost Which indeed for aeons had been gone My smile flew back to me here After living through all the wrongs. The wind through the trees tonight Pierces directly through my soul But the chill does not effect me For someone else the bell tolls, You've abducted my free thoughts I want to make love to your mind Something infinte as this I feel Can easily withstand aging time. In parting with the sandman calling It's my goal to make you see That out of all the pain and insanity I love you for finding me. Jeremy T. Sellers 1/30/01 12:57 AM < !signature--> Sometimes Illusion(s) aren't that at all "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe [This message has been edited by firejerm (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
Breathless......speechless.......and in utter AWE of the "beauty of your heart" once again! Such depth of emotion, along with sincere devotion, that I have yet to find. I will always remember the night this poem was given, in such a SPECIAL way. Thank you for the gift! [This message has been edited by Illusion (edited 01-30-2001).] |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Excellent piece. Shows quality. Please write me. I would like to invite you to my private forum. *thanx* mYsTiC |
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Temptress*Moon Member
since 2001-01-15
Posts 240Long Island, NY |
you have such a way with words Temp! I slept and dreamed that life was beauty was thy dream then a shadowy lie? -ESH- |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Dramatic "invitation" of sorts. Compellingly done. |
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