»
Archives
»
Dark Poetry #3
»
who am i
| Dark Poetry #3 |
|
who am i |
|
|
blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
Who am I? Who am I? I don’t know, do you? I wander through glaciers and seabeds Shiver in the cold of isolation Cocooned inside a bubble That brings no warmth Who am I? I don’t know, do you? Loneliness stems from What I am Or rather, what I am not. Who am I? I don’t know, do you? Created within, It seeps outwards And stabs with a dull ache Worse than any mortal injury can inflict Who am I? I don’t know, do you? I wander landscapes of desolation Not fairs of life candy And when I do I am not in mesh with it Who am I? I don’t know, do you? I hang precariously On each precipice I grab Spurts of promise Die in the swirling vortex of dust Who am I? I don’t know, do you? Even if I did Would it really matter? Who would care? Would you? |
||
| © Copyright 2002 blakloks - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
baerlon Member
since 2000-01-14
Posts 197Youngstown and East Liverpool, Ohio, USA |
I feel this all to much. I hope you figure it out because i surely haven't There's a peace inside us all |
||
|
arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
liked it It is a thought we have all had a sense of being some how isolated from existence Just a watcher not a participant |
||
|
blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
thanx! when i wrote this i was kind of depressed... and then i started thinking that pple wld think i wanted to commit suicide, which i dun ...what a mess...haha |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
