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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
In darkness I sit awaiting nothing, To go on, With a calm, Silently just accepting, No star shine Or moon shine, Without three fingers of gin, Without food, Without mood, Care not where I am or been, I’m just here, Soullessly and without cheer. Gloom |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
sighing... trying to reach out... if you want, I am here if not, know I care. I have been there before as have many others love you M |
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Neala Member
since 1999-08-21
Posts 262Florida, USA |
Cheer up......I hope it gets better. Sends a hug. I enjoyed the poem much though. -Nela |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL |
yea, what she said, cheer up. I've been where you are and took it to the extreme; I ended up in facilities across the state and on so much medication I didn't know what to do with myself, along with the hellish fact that I ruined my body by overdosing so many times... I have permanent scares on my writsts. It isn't worth it. It's taken me 5 years to realize that you need to live and love as much as you can... I almost stripped my own life away, I tried to rob my future. Look on the better side of things and if it seems there is no better and brighter side, look harder... What dosen't kill you can only make you stronger.... Jessica |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Jessica speaks the words of truth. Cheer up Gloom. This poem was great! You have a way of making your poems short, but getting the point across in a very strong manner. Good job. LadyPeach1 |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, Nakdthoughts, For you kind words and gentle thoughts. Thank you, Neala, Pleased you enjoyed. Thank you, Jessica, Been there done that already, a couple of times, Just don’t get into self mutilation, I don’t believe in suicide, That’s for the weak. You think in a fallacy there is no bright side, All sides are equally dark. But I appreciate to concern in your words. Thank you, Ladypeach1, Glad you liked my brief emotional poem. Gloom |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
as always .... blessings to you and yours ~~ Connie ~~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good write Professor. Tomorrow is another day... and the sun also rises. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Necro Draconis Member
since 2000-05-19
Posts 115 |
A world without gloom, wouldn't be a world at all. In order to be truely happy, you must first realize what happiness is  Great Poem!Let nature guide your soul, and the rest will fall into place. |
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blakloks Member
since 2002-06-01
Posts 60 |
cheer up! Necro Draconis is right, now u have gone through all this gloom, when u finally experience happiness u will treasure it so much more. the poem is realli emotional, good for you that you could let your feelings out |
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