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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
your anxious heart won't conceal the lies he's told about the wishes and dreams of your ancestors, who go before your mind and speak from the grave to your ambitions Smash your beliefs and lose your hopes because nothing will change the way it's been going to be for all time till the end of time, when you will meet your destiny love "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
Your writing interest me. It reminds me of an Norwegian poet named Sigbjørn Obstfelder, and believe me, that is a compliment. Base not your joy upon the deeds of others, |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
A most original creation in a most original writing style. The separations are very dramatic...not unlike caesura in dramatic reading being recreated in writing. I like!! |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Thankyou all for the compliments. Seems I'm having a bit of a resurgance of poetry-writing and reading here. Glad to see it's being recieved well. "If history is to change, let it change. If the world is to be destroyed, so be it. If my fate is to die, I must simply laugh" |
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