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Emotion |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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EMOTION Emotion on fire like dead winter grass burns lines and circles in stillness of night and smoke, the smoke of truth with no proof, moves and rolls like thunder in sky. It’s there in air for those who can feel, no words to describe, no heart to decide, ownership rights to the message it bears delivered unwrapped in paper of lies. I breathe and receive, think I’m deceived, feel happy/sad tears trickle down cheeks, but now my own supercede the unreal and the cure I seek remains out of reach. I look and seek through eyes into souls not there, not there, it never is there for the circles and lines can’t ever align when smoke of truth hangs heavy in air. The cure? No cure, no way to disown emotion of soul with a life of its own. HMH |
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NapalmsConstantlyConfused
since 2001-05-15
Posts 529 |
"smoke of truth with no proof" very evocative writing here, i like this. -Dave |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Your words were so powerful and the imagery was wonderful. Take cared........Sue Suetang |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you both for reading. I do appreciate your comments. |
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