The End of My Failure.. and my dreams

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LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

0 posted 2002-03-23 10:44 AM

Here it goes,
Another day,
All my sadness,
By tears washed away,

Once again I failed,
I never do anything right,
I have given up the battle,
I can no longer fight.

My dreams,
There gone,
My hopes,
I long.

My broken wings long to fly,
But my dreams crashed on me,
And now I'm wondering why?

Why can't I have the dreams I long for,
Why can't anything be right?
When will everything turn out all right?

I wish I could have another chance,
But I can't pull myself to be relieved,
Someone evil stole my happiness,
Taunted and decieved.

This is the last string that holds my dream,
Soon to be cut like the rest,
I wanted to be successful,
I wished to be the best.

Now I'm just a failure,
Nothing will make this right,
That snake reared its ugly head,
Struck and took it's bite.

My heart cries,
My soul yearns,
I guess this is all my fault,
And now I have learned.

The failure that I have already accomplished,
I hope in time will fade away,
I will go on with life and hopefully find another dream,
I'll just keep taking life day by day.

skyshine

Member Elite

since 2002-02-07

Posts 3058
Beneath the northern stars

1 posted 2002-03-25 11:14 PM

Keep your head up, LadyPeach. Nice words.

sky

EveGnosis
Member

since 2002-02-21

Posts 300
New York, USA

2 posted 2002-03-26 02:08 AM

"My heart cries,
My soul yearns,
I guess this is all my fault,
And now I have learned."

And in learning something, LadyPeach1, you have proven not to be a failure! I think that sometimes those who truly are spirits of heart bear stronger burdens than the mediocrities of life. But the beautiful parts of yourself that you hold so endeared make the burdens not necessarily justified, but bearable, and able to be learned from, and thus you are stronger in your beauty of heart and spirit. I embrace this piece. It is real, and a gift to us who read it. You will overcome the negative feelings, and be blessed for the person you are!

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2002-03-26 02:52 AM

Don't ever give up!! Whatever you get in the end will be worth the wait!! Beautiful words here!!

ELMO

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

4 posted 2002-04-02 06:12 AM

Thank you all for the support and replies!
LP

LadyPeach1
Member

since 2001-06-04

Posts 282

5 posted 2002-04-22 10:20 PM

EveGnosis, lately i have been so depressed and i don't know how to express my feelings with family or friends. but your words encouraged me so much, and for me to think i have no one to talk to, but then again, i come online and talk to complete strangers that totally relate to what i'm going through, and i really appreciate support from everyone on piptalk because they understand "ME". thanks so much.

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