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Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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0 posted 2002-12-12 10:36 AM


Steel
Shimmering blades
cold as ice
slicing through soft terrain
setting free, the pain inside me
caused by the cold steel
of loves lies



May your heart feel the warmth of love and may love fill everyday of your life
© Copyright 2002 Alan - All Rights Reserved
dgvarner
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since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
1 posted 2002-12-14 11:27 PM

ouch...feels like a blade inpaling a heart for sure... ....

hoping, if this is a personal writing, that things look up for you soon my friend...

hugs, g

"laughter is the shortest distance between two people"  - victor borge
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