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Pray For Me Not
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Pray For Me Not |
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firejerm Member
since 2000-06-13
Posts 217Springfield, OH, good ol USA |
Pray for me not Since I no longer believe, I trust in a feeling Now it's got to leave. Bleed out my soul Gashing wounds unseen, You'll never see Just how much to me you mean. Pray for me not For heaven is now extinct, This slashing web of emotion Disallows me to think. Make them here believe The torn victim is you, Maybe just a little But not entirely true. Pray for me not We know it does no good, I'd scream myself silent If indeed I only could. An angel's bare skin Yet tonight I didn't see, Her presence shook my core Somehow violating me. Pray for me not For you make an easy goodbye, Yet I master the game But you won't tell me why. To love, honor, cherish And those other cliches, Loving you though I guess Was not enough to say. Pray for me not Again I will walk alone, A heart that was warming Reverts back to its stone. I'm taking my game Psychological pawns, To figure out my mystery Of all the wrongs. Pray for me not I'll devour my misery, Romance is dead Killed by its own chivalry. Your belief in me dead What more can I do, Sincerety rang however When I said I loved you. Jeremy T. Sellers 1/28/01 2:32 AM "Those little slices of death, how I loathe them." -Edgar Allen Poe |
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Scarlet Lady Member
since 2000-02-11
Posts 242Midwest |
If hearts do sing a true song.....and "out of the abundance of ones heart", it does TRULY speak......YOU have shown us a great deal of the wonder YOU truly are! I am in awe of your work Jeremy, and so honored to call you a fellow poet. Your work is brilliant and you need to know that! Thank you for your special gift! |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
I loved this one. From begining to end, excellent! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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mystic requiem Member
since 2001-01-26
Posts 144 |
Yea baby! This is good mellow dark stuff. A great piece that kept me reading. *thanx*   mYsTiC |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Wrenching and ripping! |
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Dark_kisses_Within Senior Member
since 2000-03-21
Posts 680Kansas |
Well you sure did out do yourself here. Great words of wisdom. But u mentioned *victim*, isnt it better to have loved then never to of loved at all? I think we tend to over look the reasons we fell in love with a person. And let the anger take over. Sad, but thats how I believe. Once again, very nice work. Mags No person is worth your tears, and the only one that is ...... will never make you cry |
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