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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
-TWO- it's amazing how two weeks can hurt so amazing I sit here trying and crying so damn worked up so far from the binds indeed in the window can any be but your last can I just kiss your again another two weeks just for oneword maybe it's because we haven't heard so fight as we may chance those weeks again today talk the walk and change the meaning destroy eachother within it all maybe we're just 2 weaks J.L. Koehler [This message has been edited by carolinadreams (03-02-2002 06:00 AM).] |
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fractal007 Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 1958 |
Nice poem. Did you mean to say "Two weaks" at the end? It was an interesting wordplay. |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
I meant to have you think if that helps any. Thank you for pondering. |
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