Dark Poetry #3 |
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In The End |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
In The End The angles appeared to me They opened the doors so I may see That my love has fallen to it's knees As my soal collapes into the sea The water overcomes my life Cutting through my soal like a knife Leaving behind only the endless strife That consumed everything throughout my life Love has vanished in the end Cupid gave all that he could lend But so greatly do we spend That it consumes us in the end [This message has been edited by Encarta (02-18-2002 11:00 AM).] |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
Wow, that was a beautiful poem, filled with anger and hurt. Good job. Write on! LadyP ![]() |
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Encarta Member
since 2002-02-14
Posts 101My homeland is not of the world |
thanks ![]() |
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dimples New Member
since 2002-02-15
Posts 7 |
Great poem, love is hard to find and well hard to keep. This was excellent I hope I'll see more |
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