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Dark Poetry #3
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Rosebud1229
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since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
0 posted 2002-02-18 12:57 PM

My hearts in tune,
At least to gloom,
How else can I react,
Same tears keep falling,
No laughter heard,
Numb and sad,
Seems to be the just the
appetizers,
Come closer lean in,
Look at the dark circles of depression,
That's just the eyes of your rejection,
Once you were my very best friend,
Now I can't even pretend,
you ever even cared,
So much for the happily ever after.
© Copyright 2002 Rose - All Rights Reserved
LadyPeach1
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since 2001-06-04
Posts 282
1 posted 2002-02-19 05:09 PM

wow, that was really sad. good write!
LadyP
Rosebud1229
Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813
North Carolina
2 posted 2002-02-20 11:14 PM

thanks LadyPeach, I was beginning to think perfect title no reaction no one reading um well you know what I mean.
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