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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
so many worries, yet so many set aside so many times, such infantacide claims of youth and tales of yore as if they've been there before such a singular way of romacing a day such spins to just sit and wait to wrap the rope maybe just wait and forget to hope it's not you can't be not your fault couldn't be it's been spun a correct way so no worries for you today J.L. Koehler |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
Having also written a poem titled Circles, I was curious to see this one I was not disappointed. Good use of subtle metaphor, I had to think and I like poems that do that. Becarefull with that rope, there are so many other good uses for it take care and God bless |
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PoetryIsLife 
since 2001-10-27
Posts 1763...in my boxers... |
A wonderful simple yet profound post my friend. I loved it. Very nicely done mate.  Keep it up, and God bless.Sincerely, Titus "Shot to the heart, and you're to blame... Darling, you give love a bad name." - Bon Jovi [This message has been edited by PoetryIsLife (01-18-2002 05:16 PM).] |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
not my style of poetry, but good words and good ideas, i enjoyed it |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
a unique poem with a unique topic. Good job Ronil (One becomes god only when they have fully understood the role of being a human being.) |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
I think metaphors are our way of dancing around the truth, and you do so wonderfully! Very interesting piece and well written. Kudos. Quod me nutrit me destruit. |
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