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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
as tension rushes past the threshold a final synapse between the borders of right and wrong amplification pushes clarity for course of action stimulation of the dormant patient for so long ive been patient ive collected my dues i feel the pressure i know what to do a simple test hiding in the shadows awaiting this precious moment of vulnerability met with a simple need for basic vitality no better time than now for instability i cant suppress it this time i feel it shift, i feel it slide i wont hold back this time this urge wont be denied i feel your limitations press themselves upon me your institutions, your buildings opposition meeting this need to just be free vast contemplation met with mass retaliation |
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mauddib Member
since 2002-01-12
Posts 119melbourne australia |
fantastic poem! It flowed, it challenged,it succeeded in making me read and want to read to the end. It had a familiar feel. Mission accomplished! thanks |
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xShUgArHiGhx 
since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
GREAT POEM yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Dark Enchantress Senior Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 1258meet Morgana |
"Great poem! Keep writing!" Where is my letter? Don't make me get wild. Cuz I will... I'm a woman on the edge. *nods* Anywho, I really did like this poem a lot. I understood this one entirely so I'm all excited and junk. Like "Oooh it's my favorite!" Realization does that to you, you know? Little things become like giant... *thinks*... *thinks harder*... oh forget it. You know what I mean. I'll see you around sometime. Love, Me The only thing that I fear is to die quietly. |
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xEmperorEmber Member
since 2000-03-28
Posts 136tx |
Thank you guys. I look foward to posting more if the minds who read it are open to the messege that my work brings, whatever that messege maybe for the individual who partakes. Thank you Jaime  You are missed. |
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