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xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

0 posted 2002-01-11 12:26 PM

Hey guys...this poem was written a long time ago but it never found its way to dark so i figured i'd put this in here for you guys to see...here ya go

Im tired of being helped,
Why cant i be on my own?
People are too worried about me,
Their afraid to leave me alone...
Well stop worrying,
Your driving me all insane.
Your making me hate all of you,
Your the only ones to blame.
You see this unhappiness??
When the tears fall from my eyes??
You wonder why there's so much hurt and pain,
When you look inside.
Well maybe its because of things,
That you over look in my life.
The things like how life sux and then you die,
And nothing for me ever goes right.
The guy i love
is in love with another,
My happiness doesnt last,
From one day to the other.
I'm so exhausted,
With my expectations day to day.
I wish my life
would be taken away.
This may sound harsh,
And a sinful wish to think.
Hey well ya never know,
Thats probably why i'm seeing a shrink.
I'm mocking myself,
With every word put to paper.
I dont care right now though,
I'll worry about myself later.
So iguess this goes out,
To all the people who pretend to care.
Who are in my life,
Only cause you were put there.
Stop trying to help me,
I dont care what you say.
Just leave me alone,
Let me go on my own way.

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2002-01-12 12:22 PM

That always sux when the person you love is in love with another...James

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

2 posted 2002-01-13 10:30 PM

This was very well written. I felt like it was a post from my life about a year ago. All them people trying to help and tell you how to live and feel. Hmmmmm oh well, I guess sometimes it's better to have those kinda people there, than none at all.
Mags

Don't cry because it's over: smile because it happened.

qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

3 posted 2002-01-28 12:58 PM

Wow, I can totally relate to your every line here!! Nicely written!!

ELMO

Skyfire

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since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-01-30 01:11 AM

*hugs* Deep write here... thank you for sharing... Now I know I'm not the only person who's ever felt this way

Donate to Rhonda's Crossing the Atlantic Fund!!!

xShUgArHiGhx

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since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-01-30 05:08 PM

Thanks guys for readin and replying....im glad that you liked it!

BoOsH bOoSh nApoLE

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