Dark Poetry #3 |
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Dark December |
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RadikalGenetics New Member
since 2002-01-03
Posts 8 |
"Dark December" All alone in this Concrete jungle, where darkness comes early, where the pavement is cold and hard smashing teeth. stone buildings standing without emotion, people zig zagging back and forth, emptiness fills their eyes, I feel blind folded, I find safety in ignorance. In the grey darkness, I hunger for that place, that place where you are, where the candle light flickers, where the quilts are thick and warm. Where there are no clothes, Where anything Goes. You are my escape from this hard square world, I love your curves, they make me human again, let me burry myself in you, where limp and weak trees grow and become strong and alive again. Be my organic garden, nurish me with your love and tender touches. Give me the warmth and safety of your bossom. Hold me like a loving child and I will do the same. Let go with me and let us fall asleep in each others arms. A place where there is no cold, A place where the candle light flickering allows no darkness, because even when I close my eyes I see the Light being with you. Copyright Mark Hilton |
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amberdragoness New Member
since 2001-12-22
Posts 9 |
I realy like this...such strong passion.I hope you have or will soon find what you seek. |
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since 2000-09-26
Posts 3150tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs |
I think that you wrote your feelings beautifully here...great poem! yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
I'm surprised that this work didn't get more comments. Awesome writing! ~Tier |
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