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qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

0 posted 2002-01-03 10:50 AM

YOUR SEASONS

Your hands caress like snowflakes of Winter.
Your smile shines soft rays of Summer.
Your heart beats the Spring rhythym rain.
Your laughter washes away September's pain.
Your voice rumbles the calm of a storm.
Your thoughts take shape like clouds form.
Your mind whirls like cool Summer breeze.
Your feet dance like Fall rustling leaves.
Your eyes sparkle like midnight star.
Your warmth reminds me that you're not too far.
These are the seasons, you,
life wouldn't be the same.
Take either away,
& I'll go insane!

~~I never knew how dark the world would be without these things, but I'm desperatly searching for the light again!--It seems as if its all that matters anymore!~~

HAPPY 2002 EVERYONE!!

ELMO

[This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (01-03-2002 04:33 PM).]

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

1 posted 2002-01-03 01:27 PM

I know those dark seasons all too well. But I know what you mean about needing to find the light. Those times are the greatest. I hope you can find the sunshine again soon.

Dawn

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2002-01-03 04:33 PM

Thanx Dawn!--Yea its even worse now, cuz Winter is naturally depressing for me--lol

ELMO

Alan
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since 2000-09-12

Posts 1499
right next door

3 posted 2002-01-08 11:28 PM

Wonderful poem I hope yoou find what you are searching for.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

4 posted 2002-01-09 11:09 AM

Thanx Alan!!--I hope so too!

ELMO

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2002-01-09 01:48 PM

Im so happy that your searching for the light hun!! IT IS THERE trust me

I loved this poem and how you related things w/the seasons...i thought it was awesome! Keep em comin

yOu GeT wAt u PaId 4 bUt i JuS hAd nO..iNtEnTion oF liVin tHis waY --Counting crows

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

6 posted 2002-01-09 04:16 PM

Elmo! *claps*

Wonderful work, yet again. I love the way you write. Very creative and origonal, such as this poem is. I lvoe teh analogy. You handled it well, too.

I loved it. Keep searching and you'll find what you're looking for. *hugs* I'm praying for you. I'll email soon.

Sincerely,
Titus

I am me, living in my dreams.

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

7 posted 2002-01-09 10:49 PM

Thanx so much you guyz!!--And Titus I am lookiing forward to hearing from you again!! {hugz}

ELMO

Jeremiah Johnson
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since 2000-06-08

Posts 1223
Brooksville, Fl, U.S

8 posted 2002-01-14 02:13 PM

i've lived in those dark pasages. I still do and am beginning to think i always will. I still see beauty in the world but my hearts grown cold and crumbled. oh well. you poem is wonderful i enjoyed it alot and it speaks volumes for me thanks for shareing.

I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson-

paladin

Senior Member

since 2001-08-05

Posts 930
Pensacola,Fl.

9 posted 2002-01-14 02:19 PM

Ah! a kindrend spirit who also walks in this deep winter of the soul.We live in hope that new hope will grow from the melting snow.Sping is the time of new life.We must enure the winter to enjoy the spring.

paladin

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

10 posted 2002-01-17 12:56 PM

Thanx Jeremiah & Paladin for such wonderful comments!!

ELMO

PoetryIsLife

Senior Member

since 2001-10-27

Posts 1763
...in my boxers...

11 posted 2002-01-19 05:03 PM

Can I say again I loved this piece?

Sincerely,
Titus

Ginners
Member

since 2000-07-22

Posts 339
Mullica Hill, New Jersey

12 posted 2002-01-19 07:00 PM

I loved this! it was great and very touching

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

13 posted 2002-01-20 12:02 PM

Awe, Thanx Titus--You are a sweetie!! And thank you too Ginners for taking the time!!

ELMO

angel girl
Member

since 1999-07-23

Posts 322
within a whisper...

14 posted 2002-02-14 12:57 PM

I really like this. Thanks for sharing.

"What makes letting go hard isn't losing what you had, but losing the dream of what could have been."

AOL IM: fallprincess69

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

15 posted 2002-02-14 02:41 AM

May you find your light...this is wonderful.

"My ears have not yet drunk a hundred words
Of that tongue’s uttering, yet I know the sound:" "Romeo and Juliet"

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

16 posted 2002-02-15 03:30 PM

Thanx to both of you!--I think I have found my light again & it is slowly growing brighter everyday!

ELMO

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