Dark Poetry #3 |
Introspective |
carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
- Sometimes I wonder - i sit so many times and wonder i ask so many times and see i try so many times and fail i wonder is it just me i give so much it feels taken i take so much it feels free i wonder about the rest i wonder is it just me i spend so much i feel worthless i waste enough to be free i accept enough to smile i wonder is it just me i write enough for most i read enough for the rest i jump at the first word i wonder is it just me i run out of patience often i often wait too long i wait for you to awaken i wonder is it just me i sleep most of the day i dream most of the night i think too much always i wonder is it just me J.L. Koehler Peace, Love, and Happiness NOW [This message has been edited by carolinadreams (12-30-2001 10:21 PM).] |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
Very good poem you have penned here. You have asked a lot of tough questions. Dawn |
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carolinadreams Member
since 2000-07-20
Posts 142 |
Thank you, unfortunately I ask those same questions on a daily basis. Be well!! |
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LadyPeach1 Member
since 2001-06-04
Posts 282 |
God answers prayers and questions. Your questions won't go unanswered! Good poem! Be happy, hugs~4~you! |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
on the brignt side-- only a questioning mind ever receives answers.. take care There is society where none intrudes, by the deep sea, and music in its roar. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow,this is great!--I think this is all of us at some point, not just you--I could relate to every line & until I came here I thought it was only me too! ELMO |
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