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Broken
Member

since 2000-03-12

Posts 271
The woods

0 posted 2001-12-08 09:18 AM

LONGING

I often dream
away
And dream
of you

Of me
in your
arms

And warm kisses
your sweet
lips

How your hair
caress my
face

Beautiful
as the twilight
of gods

And how the world
seem to
cease to
exist
when we're
together

And I awake
to find
myself
alone
With nothing
but the pain
of longing

Angel
I miss you
come back
to me?

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

1 posted 2001-12-09 02:43 AM

this is so sad in it's longing...i hope you are back in your angel's feathers soon...helen

qtpieelmo
Senior Member

since 2000-07-04

Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY

2 posted 2001-12-09 09:29 AM

This is so sad & I too wait for my angel to return--I hope you get yours back soon!!

LOVE ELMO

Siofra

Senior Member

since 2000-09-28

Posts 551
State of Suspended Passion

3 posted 2001-12-09 06:58 PM

very simple requests.

These feelings are the ones that often haunt us the most.

Enjoyed.

I am many.

[This message has been edited by Siofra (edited 12-09-2001).]

Dark Poet
Member

since 2001-07-22

Posts 99
North Carolina, USA

4 posted 2001-12-12 04:11 AM

A longing that is so painful it can crack what holds the hope together.

Enjoyed.

Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace.

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

5 posted 2001-12-15 04:47 AM

Lovely

One can almost imagine an lone wolf howling out these words to the lonely haunting moon. Take care.

~ Tara ~

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-12-27 01:04 PM

Wow, this is a beautiful piece. I love the short lines, it put so much more power and emotion into them.
I hope your angel finds its way back.

--Marie

"It's been a long December, and there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows)

Dark Kisses
Member

since 2001-06-24

Posts 364
Flat lands of Kansas

7 posted 2001-12-29 10:01 PM

Beautifully written. So much power and longing.

Mags

DawnG

Senior Member

since 2000-06-23

Posts 1494
United States

8 posted 2001-12-30 11:37 AM

You have no idea how eerie this was for me to read. Great write.

Dawn

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