Dark Poetry #3 |
Broken Man |
Canuck Cat New Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 4Canada |
I see this man- He wears a mask fashioned by everyone else he lives his life and judges himself by their unrealistic standards I see his dreams- He slings them careless, across the limb to which he clings desperate, silenced by his southern pride I see this man- nightly he casts off the onerous facade he lies naked, prone covered only by his tattered ego I hear his despair- he sets forth a great cathartic lament for each gasping breath, heaving sob, I die a little death I reach across a thousand miles to caress away his tears he suffers, bled of his manliness, small comfort I must be I love this man- trodden by life by the cruelty of others I am humbled by his depth of sadness proud of his noble strength I see this man- see him sway so weary of his burdens and I give my love in hope it's enough to heal this broken man |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I could feel your anguish with every line. Enjoyed this tremendously. Welcome to our humble home. Please check your email for a special greeting. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
This is great!! Welcome to DP!! LOVE ELMO |
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lone_poet707 Member
since 2001-11-17
Posts 70black hole named Aylmer |
Wow! The lines just ooze emotion! I haven't added much to my library, but this one I will for sure -Joe |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
All I can say is... Simply Outstanding!! Welcome, welcome, welcome... to our world of darkness and despair... Until...ali "There is an alter ego which dwells within every soul." (C)alibaster 1999-2001 |
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