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Songbird
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Missouri
0 posted 2001-12-02 05:44 PM

When things are not as good as they were before
When life is not the way I want it to be
And hope is sinking behind the clouds

I stand on the shore of lonliness
Face to the wind

Remembering...
The tide must go all the way out
Before it comes back in
© Copyright 2001 Marcia Estep - All Rights Reserved
qtpieelmo
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since 2000-07-04
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Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-12-02 08:07 PM

Wow, this is short, but so powerful!! I like!!   LOVE ELMO
LadySofia
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since 2000-05-16
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2 posted 2001-12-04 01:25 AM

Right on! Short and sweet it is...encore!

^_^ LadySofia

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Dark Poet
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since 2001-07-22
Posts 99
North Carolina, USA
3 posted 2001-12-05 04:50 AM

Well said.  This powerful piece rings in the reader''s mind to reflect afterwards and that to me says a lot.

Good cannot exist without evil.  Darkness I embrace.
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