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PureM
Junior Member
since 2000-11-23
Posts 22
London, UK
0 posted 2001-12-02 01:26 PM


Not knowing..
if you are upset with me,
if you got scared, when,
I mentioned we.

Not knowing...
if you are ok,
if you are alive and well,
if I can stand feeling this way.

Not knowing...
if this is worry, anger or confusion,
if my love will ever die,
if this was all an illusion
your beautiful smile, just a lie.

My love, you disappeared without saying goodbye.. i hope and pray that you are safe.
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qtpieelmo
Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989
Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY
1 posted 2001-12-02 08:06 PM

Not knowing..
if you are upset with me,
if you got scared, when,
I mentioned we.

I like this part the best--I can remember a couple of my ex-boyfriends who got scared & left cause it got too serious for them--it hurts i know!!Hopefully it wasn't that in you case & you 2 still have a chance!!   LOVE ELMO
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2001-12-03 02:07 AM

I'm sure you will know soon enough...sometimes our expectations move us forward too fast...James
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