Dark Poetry #3 |
Eternal Mark |
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Do you know who I am? Indeed, you say. And yet as I sit here speculating thoughts to be transcribed, words to explain with poetic detail that already known in obvious extreme, I wonder at the same time. Growth into the idea of time as welcome companion rather than enemy of wants and desires is a newbie to me, albeit, it seems less far fetched than the possibilities of getting...Indeed, you do say I'll have it, and the mere thought of your " 'I'm getting there' glimmers ", well... I embrace you, with insecurities being laid aside, because I do know who you are; I say indeed. And I've been waiting a lifetime for the celebration. Across my mind races pictures of you, while my eyes focus, staring but a moment into yours, on the brilliance of glancing through the doorway of your soul. It placed its eternal mark, and thus I do know myself. So, if indeed you're getting there, and I shall have, I cherish time as my friend, you as my hope, and us as my want. All of the poetry musings aside & simply put, I love you. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Beautiful Purity, such eloquence... Isis *~ Love and Compassion are the moral fabric of world peace. ~* |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
Thank you, Isis! It has taken weeks for me to get a new computer after the last one crashed... finally got back on here. Thanks for your words of encouragement. Coming from such an eloquent person, I am flattered and thrilled. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Very beautiful words you have here. I enjoyed this very much. --Marie "It was a long December, but there's reason to believe that maybe this year will be better than the last." (Counting Crows) |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
I have to agree this is very beautiful. Thank you so much for sharing with us. Dawn |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
I love this, the words you chose fit so perfectly!! ELMO |
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