Dark Poetry #3 |
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eve_winters Junior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 12Michigan |
Every square inch of me screams a need to be with you to gaze into your eyes and lose myself in your ocean of blue the way my heart beats, flutters embraced by agony morse code for i love you mind racing with my body my body racing with my mind each trying to comprehend the feelings awakened inside fingers tracing the air where your chest should be running the length of your body with my eyes just knowing you're there, feeling the lightening before it strikes, the day will come when i hold you and all my dreams will become reality but for now, i walk alone day in and day out shuffling my feet, souls of my shoes worn at an angle, morse code for i miss you... |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
And to that, all I can say is thank you... "A renewed hope that this day you will proclaim me victorious, with three simple words...And I remove my secret armor, and live in peace with you..." I love it, and I to the fullest extent needed that as a beacon to continually guide me on the path I fight even myself to veer from... |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Wow, the feeling I got from this is indescribable--I know this feeling all too well--Great images here!! Welcome to DP ![]() ![]() |
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Daemonyin Junior Member
since 2001-11-24
Posts 31 |
I was harpooned at the first verse of this beautiful, amazing poem. You articulate your feelings well, and I hope to see more. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Welcome to our family. I really enjoyed this poem especially the shoe morse code image! Please check your email! ![]() |
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eve_winters Junior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 12Michigan |
wow, thank you all for making me feel so welcome here ![]() |
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taramw Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 738 |
Sorry to hear your words to fall on deaf ears... but not really you know... in this wonderful world ![]() "souls of my shoes worn at an angle"... loved it!!! Welcome ![]() ~ Tara ~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes the missing...hopefully it will be a time for love to grow and happiness will be yours...James |
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RevToiletDuck New Member
since 2001-12-05
Posts 1 |
heh, she wrote it for me....jealous? It really is beautiful.. |
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eve_winters Junior Member
since 2001-11-29
Posts 12Michigan |
awww thanks revy ![]() ![]() |
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