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An Angel's Sin
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An Angel's Sin |
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Jessica
since 2001-06-28
Posts 350South AL 
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An angel's tear drop Felt deep within Falling in complete silence Not portraying her sin An angel's sweet touch Upon your skin Caressing your thoughts Feeling helpless again An angel's innocent stare Pulling you farther in Hiding her empty faith Letting you win An angel's gentle words Filling your ears with lust & sin Slicing her way through your heart Forcing the weak to condescend 7:21 PM 11/22/01 |
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Kosetsu Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 450Alabama, USA |
You know I like this one, but I guess I'll just have to say it again. It rocks, though it's not your best. -Adam  "Diplomacy is the art of saying 'Nice Doggy' while you search for a rock." - Will Rogers |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
this is a great piece. i love how you show the sin of an angel. keep it up ---The Devil is an angel too--- Can't remember who said it I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Enjoyed the read my friend. jwesley |
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