Dark Poetry #3 |
There But For A Moment... |
Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
There but for a moment, the hurt enrages the heart to defense temper flaming towards you out of anguish and love words attack to hide the grief in total misunderstanding I'm stuck with you for life; the facades now turn and lie. but is the facade the lack of hatred for yourself who deems facade a hate? the flickering candle reminesces the angelic valor of the truest truth denied wings bruised in turning away in such confined space not broken... still healable... still feathered with life, somewhere. And after there but for a moment... I remember it all well...I know Why I hyperextended my own wings of love for you. And I cry alone. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Very nicely stated, my friend. jwesley |
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Jeremiah Johnson Senior Member
since 2000-06-08
Posts 1223Brooksville, Fl, U.S |
simply i love this one as well, simply you care about whoever this is for. keep it up. I'm a dying romantic and when i can no longer write i can no longer live -Jeremiah Johnson- |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
It makes no sense that they were there in that way and now they are gone does it? I share your hurt and confusion on this one my friend. Isis |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well put, and welcome! "Let me pierce the realm of glamour |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Good writing Purity...James |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Hey there! Welcome to Passions! I like this & hope ya stay here a while! LOVE ELMO [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 11-27-2001).] |
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