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What never to say
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What never to say |
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Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
Made a big mistake tonight, and this is what came of it. Don't know what's happening with G, but we'll see So close, yet out of my reach Friends only, nothing more More unbearable than hatred My heart, broken with sorrow The words I never should have spoke Spoken with foolish haste All of my life now a waste To be spent in longing, for the one I pushed away Damiano, her name sparks my mind like fire For her my heart burns with love and desire Yet all gone, for now and for good And now I curse the words that I spoke Those twisted, trait’rous words That bind me just out of reach Of the one I care about the most Those words being: I love you C'est plus qu'un crime, c'est une faute |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I dunno...I have found that when you say them to the right one they like it...of course timing is necessary...James |
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Ginners Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 339Mullica Hill, New Jersey |
i know how you feel and what you mean. you think someone wants to hear it and they dont then they run away, i have been there, things worked out eventually, but all the same i remember the feeling, good luck. and by the way, who is G, just asking cuz when you reply to my poems you call me G "I'll build a wall if we can keep them on the other side"---NIN "There is no always forever, just this"-the cure |
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Skoota Junior Member
since 2000-12-23
Posts 28Australia |
Okay, Ginners, In this case, G is Gina, not you. Sorry for the confusion and JM, I always seem to have the worst timing, so this poem usually applies. C'est plus qu'un crime, c'est une faute |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
it does backfire doesn't it? You know, this exactly happened to me but at the same time, this shouldn't scare us from saying it again much emotions and feelings in this poem thanks for the read I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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