- shatter - (ok, so it was a bad day)

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Dark Poetry #3

- shatter - (ok, so it was a bad day)

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

0 posted 2002-12-08 04:15 AM

Listen the shatter and the breaking of my mind
Hear the thoughts just tremble,
See temptation leading blind.
Following in bitterness, before they face defeat.
Outraging in the silence
Of a fading armies fleet.
Now wishing to be whole again, the pieces all adrift.
Tape and glue are hopeless,
For something such as this.
I think, I know, I lost it: the hope that I once held
For now this silence in me
Has all but been expelled.
Theres a hammering and pounding all that is within
And so when I try my hardest;
All I see is my own sin.
I haven’t been defeated, I won’t let it be that way.
But I sure would like to give up,
And flee this wretched day

- And so it was that time stood still -

[This message has been edited by GG (12-08-2002 04:20 AM).]

LADY_DEATH
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since 2002-11-29

Posts 105
Fl

1 posted 2002-12-08 02:56 PM

Great poetry!!I've had days like that ,, but please keep writing!!!You are a natural!!

bsquirrel

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-01-03

Posts 7855

2 posted 2002-12-18 12:14 PM

This should be on the radio.

GG
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since 2002-12-03

Posts 3532
Lost in thought

3 posted 2002-12-18 09:38 PM

Thank you both!

yea the raddio eh? they'd get calls in, "what kind of crazy person made that thing up!" haha.

thanks again!
Keep writing, Keep walking, Keep faith.
Always, GG

- And so it was that time stood still -

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