Dark Poetry #3 |
Compulsive Liarbility |
qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
COMPULSIVE LIARBILITY! Lie to my friends, even to family. Say what they wanna hear, to get away from reality. I hate it, but can't help it. Would it be better, if my tongue I bit? Lie even to myself, so often I think it's real. The truth hurts me too bad, so much I cannot deal. The truth is right there, but I say something else. Not sure as to why. To protect others? Myself? I say I don't need anyone, but cry 'cause I'm alone. Lies flow out of my mouth. Truth can't find a home. Lie to the one I love, to whom I really care. He doesn't even deserve it, & I am not being fair. I'm convinced that I don't deserve him, & lie to set him free. I just want him to be happy, & maybe that means losing me. Lieing, fibbing, withholding, they all hurt just the same. The person who's unknowing, & yourself in shame! LOVE ELMO [This message has been edited by qtpieelmo (edited 11-09-2001).] |
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Dark Poet Member
since 2001-07-22
Posts 99North Carolina, USA |
I think we've all lied at one point becuase either the truth was not easy or that a lie was the nicer path. Enjoyed, James Good cannot exist without evil. Darkness I embrace. |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
yea, thanx!! LOVE ELMO |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
That's a hard piece of self critique. Really enjoyed reading it. No matter what you do with everyone else, stay true to yourself. That's what's most important. JT |
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aries_luv_ppl Senior Member
since 2001-09-20
Posts 1448Universal Mind |
I really like it. It speaks so much truth, that one or other time we feel helpless to lie. I got your poem copy to my comp=) I hope you will like my poems as well. Love, |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Thanx JT & Aries!!--I'm my biggest critic!!--lol--Gotta be tough on myself, noone else is!!-- LOVE ELMO |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
At least you're on the right track by admitting that it's wrong. keep staying on the same path thanks for sharing là où est mon amour? |
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qtpieelmo Senior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 989Sesame Street :) hee hee ,NY |
Yea, I'm really trying, thanx! It's so hard! I dont like to be a disappointment, so it's much easier to tell people what they want to hear! ELMO |
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