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A day without light
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A day without light |
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Poetof-the-night Junior Member
since 2001-10-09
Posts 13 |
A day without light Darkness envelops the land… The people stop, look up and see the sun being eclipsed by the moon. None have the thought that this wasn’t the time for an eclipse. A week later, complete darkness takes hold, still some hope as they take shelter from the predators that now hunt them… Another week and the hopes dwindle as the death toll reaches horrid proportions. Another week and the tensions reach high levels. Another week and betrayal takes seeds into the minds of some. The predators have adaptations that make them impossible to elude, only light can fend of the monsters but the technology of the world is failing and the world now feels desperation as a whole. The scientists struggle to find a solution but all they have is an ominous message: The darkness is lasting for an unknown amount of time. The world covered in darkness… The people are being covered in the darkness of death… The brave… The strong… The smart… Now it seems that all of humanity is lost as the unrelenting darkness covers and its offspring kill the dwindling numbers of humans… "Don't think you can know you can" |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this reads like a very scary story. I think you could do a lot with this....is there going to be a part 2???  |
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Baroni Member
since 2001-10-14
Posts 94Ontario, Canada |
Very apocalyptic... and I think it's scary because it is so possible... we could end up destroying ourselves.... Excellent. Due to circumstances beyond your control, you are master of your fate and captain of your soul. |
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JT Member
since 2001-09-28
Posts 69Arkansas, USA |
This really sticks out. Dark and scary. There could be so many metaphors for the darkness. I like what you've done here. JT |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Yes,very scary thoughts promoted with this reading Sandra |
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